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Schrei vs Thorren
« on: June 21, 2012, 12:19:46 PM »
This is a fight thread between Schrei of Anka vs Thorren of Orn Blod over all land currently claimed as Anka.

This is a 1 on 1 fight. Each side may bring one supporter and witness to the fight.  This Supporter/Witness are only to watch and are not allowed to enter the fight at any time.

The marshland fight rules apply.  Please make sure you have read over all rules regarding posting requirements on length, spelling and grammar.  Please write your fight posts out as detailed and clear as possible.  At anytime an organizer may lock the thread if a complaint is made that requires the thread to be reread.  Unless an action by a fighter is deemed quite serious, each SIDE/TEAM may be asked to make corrections to posts involving vague/hard to understand statements within the post, autos etc.  These are individually determined by one or more organizers.

Each individual has the right to edit their fight post any time within FIVE HOURS from the time they posted it.  Any editing of a post after five hours without the okay of an organizer is automatic loss.

A fight thread automatically ends when one character dies, when a thread has been up and active up to six weeks, OR when one fighter on either side fails to post within exactly 10 days of the last RP post.

This fight is NO-CONSENT, meaning individuals may maim and/or kill without permission, may the best fighter(s) win!

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Whichever alpha loses, he will become slave to the others pack

For organization purposes, this fight's six week limit ends on August 2nd
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Re: Shrei vs Thorren
« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2012, 12:59:28 PM »
now this was wonderful.

this was exactly as his father had told him a fight would start. exactly how it would begin. and exactly how it would end, if thorren played his cards right. pulling his massive figure onto a small hill, his figure would gently rest a while. positioning himself firmly upon the ground, his left leg would be positioned slightly ahead of his other. and hind legs were positioned perfectly so he wouldn't be caught off balanced. he was ready for a fight to start. he was always ready. always pacing himself for anything to happen, and operating off a one tracked mind.

even though these lands weren't his, and were anka's he'd offer shrei the option to die fighting, or to become a slave, and the possibility of gaining a rank within his lands. small tug at the corner's of his lips made the gentle giant a smile. he was proud of himself. and his father should be proud of his too. he knew somewhere that the original thorren was watching over him. sitting up in valkarie with all the women he could dream of.

ready for anything to take place. standing over a somewhat open beach area beyond his hill- he was ready. although his thought traveled back and forth between how his past father's had done this, and how his mate was doing. he didn't let himself get distracted. ears would tick back and forth, collecting any sound and processing it directly. he was a thick beast. dark and mysterious. though he wasn't here to be mysterious, he was here to fight over land that he attended to claim for his pack, Orn Blod. he needed this, he wanted this.  if the other male would show up, he'd give him a small dip of his head, and be readied for the attack to come.

and he'd be damned if anyone was going to stand in the way of it.

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Re: Shrei vs Thorren
« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2012, 06:02:26 PM »
He moves up the hill in a graceful walk filled with all the poise and prestige of one that is royalty, holding himself high and keeping his head lifted proudly. He would step up to defend the lands he has come to call his own – the lands that Anka resides on. Perhaps they were not as picturesque as the old plains and mountains and forests of their old home, these marshes might be rotting and decrepit and a bit depressing at times, but their little corner is theirs and no one else’s, and he isn’t about to stand by and just give them up. Anka is worth every effort he would put forth in this fight, every attempt he will give to tear into the skin and flesh of the other is to defend this place that is as much his as it is Quillette’s – or so he likes to think.

He tops the hill easily and without exertion, very little energy spent to climb to the top. He gets a better look at his enemy and ponders the angles and aims to which he will direct himself – will he topple, will he trip, will he tear. He does not decide this all now, however – he leaves himself adaptable to whatever the other male will counter with during each move of the fight. He readies himself for the worst, prepares for the less desirable outcome, but hopes for the best, desires the favorable ending.

He comes to a stop about twenty feet away from the other wolf and stands for a few moments, before Thorren dips his head in respect. A smile grows across his muzzle, and with eyes remaining locked on his opponent just in case the male would think to launch a surprise attack if Schrei ever became unaware, he dips his head as well, acknowledging him.

Then he launches forward. The distance between them gives him momentum, and while he lacks maneuverability he makes up for it in brute force. The other male might have thought himself a tank – but those notions were likely dissolved whenever he first saw Schrei, and perhaps previously his battle theory was to overpower. What would his strategy be now? To out-move? It could work, if Schrei was not so used to his opponents doing so – though he might not be the lightest on his paws and he moved quickly, he stayed ready for a sudden maneuver that would leave him rushing for air and his opponent going for the kill, or something similar.

He would not be caught off-guard.

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Re: Shrei vs Thorren
« Reply #3 on: June 21, 2012, 10:09:07 PM »
[[ you didn't really clarify what he was aiming for? just a launch. let me know if anything needs clarification. ]]

and so his opponent approached him. and he actually stood before him. that was a miracle. standing a mere twenty feet. the two brute forces sized one another up. tank versus tank. and he himself would not be caught off-guard either. if this brute thought that thorren wasn't a tactful warrior, he'd be mistaken. the other brute acknowledged his presence, and with that the launching sequence took place.

he wouldn't give up, just for orn blod. tooth and nail he would fight to the death if he had to.

though the brute launched. thorren did not move. he would wait. til just the right moment until he'd dodge out of the way. as shrei's body came within inches of colliding with thorren, he ducked down low. though the attack was quick and forecful, he was quicker. head would swirl around and he would aim to shred and tear into his side/belly whatever he could reach, jaws snapping and locking much like a pitbulls. he would rip him apart chunk by chunk if he had to.

if he succeeded into ripping into the flesh, after pulling away whatever meat he'd get, he would spit it out viciously turning himself to a 90 degree angle so he was sorta sideways. awaiting the males next move. a look of bring it on in his green eyes. he would be ready for anything that came his way.

if his first attack had not landed, he in turn would continue ducking but instead of aiming for the side/stomach, he would aim to tackle shrei, much like a football player he would put all force into it. but he would not take him to the ground. he would instead attempt to wrap his paws around him after the tackle that was to knock shrei off balance.

he would attempt to be giving him a bear hug from the side. he would attempt to clamp onto his neck/collarbone area, viciously shaking his head, to give him a permanent damage, aiming to break the collarbone with his grip. if his attack to latch onto his collarbone/neck failed. he would attempt instead; to viciously tear into the side of his face, still keeping that bear-hug hold onto his opponent. attempting to aim for just above his eye/the side of his face, again whatever he could grab.

after, he would attempt to push off shrei to knock shrei and thorren apart from one another. then would turn to his opponent, and give him the same 'bring it on' look, awaiting shrei's next move.

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so pretty much-

attempt attack 1: he would dodge shrei's attack and aim to latch onto and shred his side/stomach area. if succeeding in doing so, he'd follow up his stomach/side shred to pull away and spit out any meat and would await what the brute's next move would be.

attempt attack 2 if attack one failed: he would aim to tackle him. if successful in the midst of the tackle he would wrap his paws around him in a sort of 'bear hug' and would clamp onto his neck/collar bone on his right side of his body. if failed he would then attempt to aim for above his eye/side of face. after said attacks he would attempt to push off of shrei pushing one another away from eachother.

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Re: Shrei vs Thorren
« Reply #4 on: June 21, 2012, 10:44:07 PM »
[ooc]yes, that was intentional. schrei was simply charging; wasn’t actually aiming to attack and was more or less waiting to see what thorren would do. <3[/ooc]

Schrei has no intention of dying.

Perhaps to others that means he will fight less viciously, because it seems popular opinion is that if you are fighting to the death you are fighting with the utmost power – if you know your life is at stake and have accepted that, you are planning to defend it with all your might. However Schrei is not about to die, he has too much to live for – a mate, and perhaps heirs in the future that would carry on his bloodline. That is what will make him stronger than Thorren, he knows that is what will win him this battle. Because he will not allow himself to die.

The male ducks down as Schrei charges and Schrei is baffled – does he want to be trampled? Rather however than simply step all over his opponent – that would be silly – he leaps, angling himself so that he jumps not directly over Thorren but more diagonal, catapulting himself to Thorren’s left, Schrei’s right, over the male’s neck and shoulders and landing by his flank (wolves are not track runners, after all, and he can only hurdle himself so far – this is why he does not attempt to clear the entire length of the other male). He lands on his front paws, skidding slightly and using that momentum to turn himself about.

Assuming that Thorren follows through with his second attack, Schrei is now faced with a charge much like his own. However he decides to test the difference in their builds – a forty pound difference that leaves Schrei stumbling, but not horribly unbalanced. The other male goes in for a bear hug, and Schrei twists so that he is not hugging around the side. The other male is just as tall as he is, so Schrei ducks – lowering his body down drastically below the other male’s, who would have conceivably lifted his body upward to wrap his paws around any part of Schrei’s body.

Thorren would be allowed to wrap his paws around Schrei’s shoulders, but Schrei had kept all fours on the ground. This allows him to now surge forward and upward, using as much power as he can muster in his frame to try and unbalance the wolf who is now trying to stand on two legs, and meanwhile his jaws seek the throat of the other male, whose jaws close around Schrei’s angled face and tear into his cheek and forehead. An eye shuts, protecting his vision as much as he can, and since wolves’ jaws are not heat-censored it’s unlikely Thorren will be able to look down his own nose and figure out where Schrei’s eye is.

This is especially true due to the fact that Schrei is going for the jugular – literally. The other male going for his upper face has given Schrei the opportunity to twist his head just slightly and try to close the male’s windpipe between his jaws and crunch, sever or suffocate whichever works best.



summaryschrei jumps diagonally over thorren when he ducks, turns around, and is met head-on by thorren’s tackle. he ducks down, lets thorren wrap his legs around his shoulders in a bear hug, but because he’s stabilized by being low to the ground, isn’t knocked over. instead he pushes up and tries to unbalance thorren, at the same time gets his face pretty badly bitten but tries to grab thorren’s throat in return in an attempt to either crush the windpipe or tear out his jugular.

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Re: Shrei vs Thorren
« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2012, 02:17:18 PM »
[[ i was wondering, since thorren's latched onto his upper face wouldn't him reaching to grab thorren's jugular just cause him severe pain? and/or make it almost impossible to go for the jugular while he is attached there??  :o
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after, he would attempt to push off shrei to knock shrei and thorren apart from one another.
i'm sorry if i'm askin too many questions but i'm confused if you acknowledged this? or is it nulled because of something else? //its 5 am forgive me been at work and hopped on before i went to bed and am slightly confused. sorry love :( confused ade is confused ]]

[ooc]if I could draw diagrams, I would. but I'll try to explain it with words. xD Basically what happened is that in my mind, Schrei is going for Thorren's throat right as Thorren latches onto his face --
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This allows him to now surge forward and upward, using as much power as he can muster in his frame to try and unbalance the wolf who is now trying to stand on two legs, and meanwhile his jaws seek the throat of the other male, whose jaws close around Schrei’s angled face and tear into his cheek and forehead.

So imagine it like, Schrei would be grabbing Thorren's throat just as Thorren grabbed his face, yeah? Thus he wouldn't actually be pulling or ripping or tearing his face, even though Thorren did get a really good bite in and would probably be able to mangle him if he's not worried about his throat, aha.

As for that last part, that's actually my mistake -- I did forget to include that in my post. Sorry! :( If my explanations make sense, and a marsh organizer is okay with it, I'll edit my post to include a response to that attempt. <3 And don't be sorry haha, it's okay to ask![/ooc]

ahhh, that makes sense! :D well seeing as he'd be attempting to go for his throat, i believe it would possibly null the attempt to push away? not quite sure, but im pretty sure it'd be okay to go ahead and say that. (: ]]

[ooc]oh, well if you're okay with the pushing away being nulled, then that's fine with me as well. so i guess that makes it your turn. <3[/ooc]

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Re: Shrei vs Thorren
« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2012, 02:48:55 PM »
yes ma'am :3 btw you're posts are really amazing <3 just thought i'd let ya know ^.^ ]]

Thorren's paws would wrap around Schrei’s shoulders, but Schrei had kept all fours on the ground. This was a little awkward. It seemed as though Thorren was humping him from the distance. As Thorren's jaws collided with his foes face. Teeth sunk in deeply. His main concern was what the male was going to do next. And Thorren's massive body would move to Schrei's left, Schrei's attempt to unbalance Thorren would be nulled, but in doing so it would allow Shrei's attack to be directed more towards Thorren's chest/mid neck area. Teeth would sink in deeply and a good chunk of fur, and nice slab of meat would come missing.

Thorren's teeth would attempt to tighten onto Schrei's face, being as he was already there. Eyes would shoot about to his options. He would try to clamp his teeth all the way down and rip away all flesh that he had in grasps from Schrei's face, leaving a vicious wound. And in doing so would attempt to push with all his might. Back claws would dig into the ground, and he would try to slam Schrei into the ground. He would bound away before Schrei could get an attack in. Being on all fours, their fight would continue this way. And Thor would wait descreatly in the background with a throbbing chest front where Schrei's teeth had clamped down and ripped away fur and skin. It would surely leave a nasty little scar about the size of a baseball. If his attempt to push Schrei to the ground had succeeded he would simply wait ears alert and eyes narrowed.

He was in it to win it.

However; if for some reason the tan wolf had not been successful to push his opponent to the ground. Instead, he would still attempt to do said ripping away from Schrei grabbing skin and all, and launch himself over Schrei. Likely the attempt at ripping away flesh would leave Schrei mildly dismembered for Thorren to indeed leap over he. Being he himself dismembered from his chest being ripped open, he would give himself about 2 seconds to recover, before trying to leap inwards viciously to Schrei's face again. This time he would come from the left. Ducking down and bareling quickly towards the brute. Jaws would become agape as he'd attempt to swing himself clockwise. This time aiming for his nose/muzzle. He would try to suffocate him if he latched onto the nose. If he got the muzzle he would simply aim to chomp down. His goal would be to pull him to the ground, where Thorren's mouth would remain over his nose/muzzle. 

If said attacks somehow were avoided and dodged, he would simply just be waiting.

[[ let me know if this makes sense ^.^

pretty much his attack 1 would be rip all the flesh which he had in his mouth away from schrei's face, and in doing so giving him enough time to push him away from him, and to the ground, and would wait.  if thorren's attempt at pushing him to the ground missed, he would instead just counter it with still ripping the flesh away and leaping over him only to spin around quickly to attempt to latch onto his muzzle/nose. if he did so he would pull him to the ground and he'd still be latched onto his muzzle/nose. If all the attacks missed he would simply just rip away from schrei's face, and wait. ]]
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Re: Shrei vs Thorren
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2012, 03:00:24 PM »
[ooc]quick question, schrei attempted to unbalance thorren when he surged upward in that quote i put in our clarification before, did thorren not get unbalanced, or was him moving to the left a way to avoid that attack?

edit: also, fffff, thank you. <3 yours are really good too! this should be a fun fight haha.[/ooc]

lol whoops sorry, read over that. moving to his left was the way to null the unbalancing part :P i'll edit it in for your convinece hun. <3

teheheh <3 it's already fun as hell ^.^ ]]

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Re: Schrei vs Thorren
« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2012, 03:32:19 PM »
Due to Thorren moving to the left, the grab on Schrei’s face is also directed more to the left of his skull – meaning that his eye is less in danger than his ear and cheek fluff are. Schrei is okay with this, okay with these less important parts of his body being maimed – but all the same, as soon as he realizes that his teeth are closing around the male’s chest instead of his throat, he rips away, rearing back and pulling out of Thorren’s grip before he can truly cause too much damage to the male’s chest, nor before Thorren can cause too much damage to his beautiful face.

This negates Thorren’s attempt to slam him into the ground, of course, because unless Thorren is secretly a werewolf, he’s probably on all fours now that Schrei has backed out of the bear hug. Since neither situation was really what Thorren had in mind as far as either jumping over Schrei while ripping his face out, or jumping away after shoving him into the ground, Schrei would react to either as follows.

Option 1 – would be if Thorren has leapt away from Schrei rather than over him.  Schrei would actually follow Thorren, his life of battle training imbedding in him that pausing in a fight only gives the adrenaline a chance to fade and thus the pain a chance to rise. This would mean that since Schrei had never been on the ground, he was conceivably right behind Thorren when the male whirled around and bounded away – meaning that if Thorren suddenly turned on him, Schrei would be ready. He would be close enough to the male to hopefully prevent a dodge, and would attempt to ram his shoulder into Thorren’s chest and try to use his heftier weight to unbalance and knock the smaller male over – at the same time, his jaws would protect himself by snapping at Thorren to dissuade him from any ideas of biting down on any part of Schrei. If successful, he would try to go for the male’s neck and throat – not to kill, but to try and pin him down. Would this not succeed and Thorren either dodged or merely stumbled, Schrei would follow up with an attempt to grab the male’s lower cheek – right where the jaw connects to the face – and yank, trying to dislocate or possibly break the wolf’s jaw and leave him unable to bite down with any sufficient amount of power.

Option 2 – would be if Thorren leapt over Schrei, or attempted to. Schrei would surge upward, jumping straight up himself as Thorren tried to jump over him, and try to grab the male from underneath – whether by the throat, the already-mangled chest, or particularly the stomach area, at the same time headbutting the lighter wolf to try and knock him off-course and onto the ground. He would then, depending on what worked, go after the fallen male and try to grab his neck or throat in a pinning move – not intending to actually kill him, but to subdue him and proclaim himself the winner of the fight.

Would Thorren somehow avoid this strike while in mid-air, Schrei would whirl around, taking advantage of that two-second pause to get his heavier frame turned so that when Thorren went after him, he would be able to see exactly what the other male was doing. This meant that when Thorren went for his muzzle, Schrei would duck down – just slightly – and go for the jaw in this scenario as well, bypassing the male’s bite so that his fangs would likely sink into Schrei’s other cheek (wow, his face was going to be ugly after this fight) even as Schrei attempted to grab onto and yank on the male’s lower jaw, dislocating and possibly breaking it. If this were to work, then Thorren would likely have no more bite power, and this would allow Schrei to pull away from where the male had previously bitten his cheek.

[ooc]Since neither of your options were resulting from the circumstance that I put in my post, I just gave you a response to both of them. So those two main attacks wouldn’t BOTH happen, only one. But they’re actually both very similar attacks!

Option 1 basically states that Thorren turns and leaps away from Schrei, like you said he might, so Schrei follows and when/if Thorren finally turns around to face him, Schrei is like right on top of Thorren and tries to ram his shoulder into Thorren’s chest and knock him over while biting at him mostly to try and keep Thorren from getting a bite into any part of Schrei (would elaborate as to where he bites if Thorren does retaliate like this, in the next posts). If this works he tries to grab his neck/throat and pin him down. If it doesn’t and Thorren only stumbles or dodges, Schrei follows and tries to grab onto the joint of his lower jaw, where it connects to the face/cheek, and pull back really hard to dislocate or break it.

Option 2 is if Thorren tries to jump over Schrei, Schrei would jump up to try and knock Thorren out of the air and onto the ground, at  the same time he’d try to  bite down on either Thorren’s throat, chest, or stomach and get him a good injury there before he lands. If Thorren does fall to the ground, Schrei would again try to grab him by the throat/neck and pin him down. If Thorren evades the first attack, Schrei uses the two-second pause to turn around on Thorren, so when Thorren goes after his muzzle Schrei is facing him and sort of does the same thing, except he again goes for the joint of the jaw to try and dislocate/break it.

Ask if you need clarification![/ooc]
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Re: Schrei vs Thorren
« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2012, 04:18:07 PM »
So being as the two brutes were in mortal combat, Thorren's larger heftier figure succeeded into leaping away from Schrei rather then over him. Although Thorren's turn to facing his enemy was much of a surprise, when the much heftier brute rammed himself into Thorren's chest. Instead of Thorren being knocked off balance, he would push into Schrei's push too. Thus resulting in the two of them colliding like football players, Thorren's head would be down and hopefully near Schrei's lower neck area, instead of biting though, he would merely cause the two of them to collide. This would cause Schrei's attempt to go for his neck nulled. However; because Thorren reared his head up at the last moment to bite at Schrei's face, Schrei's attack to his cheek worked, but instead of breaking it, he simply snagged his skin and ripped off a flap of skin.

His skin ripped easily as Thorren leapt into Schrei even more, flesh dangling from his cheek. (assuming they were colliding like said) Thorren would aim his attack this time for underneath Schrei's neck/chin, but because Thorren expected Schrei to move or avoid the attack he wouldn't reconcile. Instead he would be going inwards with full on powerful attacks. So no matter what he would be taking hits to snap his jaws underneath his chin/neck and he would latch on. His teeth would grip tightly and not let go, aiming to puncture his voice box and rip flesh off. If this attack succeeded he wouldn't stop here, instead he would turn his head to not only rip flesh off but to headbutt the other wolf, and bite viciously at his other side of his face at the high-jawbone area to break it right below his eye. And if he was lucky he would aim to destroy his right eye too (assuming Schrei's left side of his face was injured??).

In the midst of all this, if somehow Schrei were to escape the attack meant for his eye, he'd pull back and wait.

[[ so basically thorren nulled schrei's attack at knocking him over. he puts his head down and pushes into schrei with equal strength. his head pops up long enough for schrei to rip the flesh on his cheek, instead of breaking it, and thorren would push himself even further into schrei's body and in doing so hopefully knocking him unbalanced he would aim for his neck/chin area, but because thorren expected schrei to dodge he would follow him no matter what rushing him and eventually hope to clamp onto his neck/chin area. if he succeeded he would  headbutt the other wolf, and bite viciously at his other side of his face at the high-jawbone area to break it right below his eye. And if he was lucky he would aim to destroy his right eye too.

if schrei missed escaped the attack for his eye, he would just pull back and wait ]]
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Re: Schrei vs Thorren
« Reply #10 on: June 29, 2012, 01:17:37 AM »
[ooc]erp, well. this is what i get for coming in here distracted. this is mostly @ the mod team -- i DID just edit my post, but the only reason i edited it was to make the ooc a smaller font size. so yeah, i hit the "modify post" and then was like "CRAP" but obviously can't un-modify it, and since i didn't ask for permission and it's outside the five hours, i'm pretty sure i just broke a rule. :/ if this needs to be locked or whatever for deliberation because i edited the ooc in my post, then... yeah, not much i can do. but i didn't want to just try and hope no one would notice, because... i've got nothing to hide, literally all i did was add the "size" tags to the ooc in my post. but... let me know, haha.[/ooc]/size]

[[ i'm hoping that it should be fine o.O ]]

If Ade has no problem with it, since it's a mutual trust she has in you vs worried about you editing your post post, then I don't see why this cannot continue. I know rules are rules but since you were honest about it and Ade doesn't mind, I say continue on ^_^

I do have a concern on the last part of Thorren's last post though. Could you elaborate as to how Thorren uses Schrei as a spring board? I'm a little lost as to what you mean and, since they're collideded into one another or spaced enough where they can go for each other's chin/throat area, I don't see how this is possible? So if you could explain it to me, that would be wonderful.

[[ yes ma'am i will elaborate on that, should i edit my post? pretty much whats going on is IF he misses the attack on Schrei's eye, he will draw backwards away from him and leap upon him, but more so kicking off, thus enabling thorren to use him as a spring-board and would aim to come back down to the ground after springing off of him to injure him. xP sorry wrote that post realllyyy early in the morning lol ]]

I.. don't necessarily get it but if Pride understand it then I guess we can just roll with it. I'd definately need a diagram or play by play on how this is possible. I, personally, just don't see how that would work but again if Pride gets it then we can go with it.

Eh, I think it's better if you'd just edit the spring board part out for simplicity sake. Since we haven't heard from Pride, or the person taking over this challenge for her, then I think that it's just best we do that. So when you can, Earth Mother, please edit that out. The 10 day deadline will resume from the last RP post. So Schrei's player, or temporary player, has until July 2nd to post. These needs to keep moving

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Re: Schrei vs Thorren
« Reply #11 on: July 02, 2012, 04:54:25 PM »
Since Schrei failed to within the 10 day deadline, I declare Orn Blod the winner. Please provide Corgwn with the name of your board as well as the name of the Alpha account you're using and she will have your board up as soon as possible, only then will your Grace Period start. Congradulations!

Also, if you require any sub-boards then read this thread, follow the instructions, and Corgwn will provide that for you as well.

In Agreement To The Special Terms: Schrei is now a slave of Orn Blod